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AppleAmps
I wonder if my tendency to do really fucked up long sentences when writing in English is due to the fact that they tend to be longer in Spanish. I'm writing stuff that is orthographically and grammatically correct in this language but it comes out wrong because I'm importing the pacing from a different one.
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Amps
AppleAmps
Long obtuse sentences are also just a sign of amateurish writing in general, though. I'm sure that with some practice I'll be able to make my sentences leaner.
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Amps
AppleAmps
A ver si esto suena mas natural en castellano:
Me pregunto si mi manera de escribir oraciones gigantescas en inglés es porque en general son mas largas en el español. Estoy escribiendo cosas ortograficamente y gramaticamente correctas en este lenguaje pero salen mal porque uso el ritmo de uno distinto.
Cheeeee banca creo que tengo razón, salió mucho mas natural así.
Me pregunto si mi manera de escribir oraciones gigantescas en inglés es porque en general son mas largas en el español. Estoy escribiendo cosas ortograficamente y gramaticamente correctas en este lenguaje pero salen mal porque uso el ritmo de uno distinto.
Cheeeee banca creo que tengo razón, salió mucho mas natural así.
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Amps
AppleAmps
This is actually a pretty tough problem to solve quantitatively because I can't just automatically check for it like I can with spelling or grammar, I was never taught to spot it.
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